LOL
LOL, yeah, all i have to say
LOL
LOL, yeah, all i have to say
keep it up
im not a good adviser. but when you test things out,try NG Alphas.(although i don't do that even if its a beta hehe) love that tv.. and add more sound effects..and make sure that the sounds you get ring a bell with the action..try a glass splintering effect when the computer crashes...if you will continue the computer crash of course.
weeeeelll...
one, don't submit incomplete stuff to the portal. it probably won't stay. second, don't act all apologetic and say it's your first animation, that actually only increases the chances it'll get blammed.
the main problem i noticed is the background. it sort of flicked in and out like you forgot to put it in all the frames or something. also, it was pretty boring to watch. i was about to x it out but then it was over. the drawing and animation weren't bad (definitely good for a first animation) so submit something that's actually finished with those other things in mind and you'll do alright.
was an ok concept.
be careful using .gifs and such too much because they will increase the file size dramatically more then if u were to animate them.
well done
but when you submite things try finshing them 1st you will get more votes