ehhh
the animation was awsome the story i thought was too girly for me otherwise a great flash
ehhh
the animation was awsome the story i thought was too girly for me otherwise a great flash
First Submission? Nice.
Well done. I have to agree that the story was a little short and I didn't quite understand it but I look forward to seeing more of your work. Some people submit a lot of flashes here and don't do half as good as this.
banshee or pixie?
I got a mixed feeling for this...in your author's comments and in the prologue, you speak of the banshee like a deadly siren or something really dark. Yet, the movie is nothing about what you speak of. Ok, you got the flying pixies (wich you may call banshee -_-) and you got the ''the ring'' influence just screaming at every corner. but its just... REALY not what i was expecting from what your comments said.
Also, congrats on being able to sync a different sound with every single movements made by the pixie, but hearing a ''boom'' when she turns her head left and a ''ding'' when she turned right just felt akward .
Aside those 2 things, I really liked your artwork ,your animation was fluid, and most of the sounds used felt right. I couldnt help but think about sadako throughout the whole movie... I wonder if that was intended by you.
haha
Heh, it's kinda ghetto cause you got the whole 'grudge' or 'ring' (whatever that movie was!) going on. It was pretty good, though I gotta say there was too much bouncy noises to me, that's all. Short, but good. It's cool that you'll make more (though I don't know where it will go since the banshee was set free?) maybe there's different ones, I dunno....
better than me
I liked it yeah needs some better humour other wiase short and sweet nice