Not bad guy
Not bad at all. It was a little slow and their transformations really didn't look like an alternate form of the original but still not bad.
Reviews for "Hien's Revenge"
nice
make more
HolyShiet!!!!!!WOW
Man that was some crazy action!!! Great job on your first submission. You have some mad skillz kid....... Hopefully you are working on the next part to the story.. I would like to see what happens...
Excellent.
Definitely a great first submission. I would love to see the story be turned into a full series.
5/5, hope to see it get accepted!
Wow!
Very nicely done! Congratulations on your first submission. Hard to believe this is your first, it's that good. Nice and very long!