omg lol
omg he killed a bird!!!!!!
Reviews for "rock-FLY"
chillwhale responds:
yes!
artistic
I like it. You already know some of the problems since you listed them. Just focus on depth. Make the characters look deep with shadows and highlights. I like the flapping wing effect on the bird, so keep that. Make the dark outline of your characters a little thinner so it looks less cheap, and add a little more to the sky. Try cirrus clouds. Other than that, I think it's an interesting piece. Keep up the good work.
chillwhale responds:
there will not be, unfortunetly, any bird in the rebirth of this film....
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Good start. keep on truckin'!
chillwhale responds:
thanx :D
Its Good!
I actually quite liked it, the animation was smooth the graphics were fairly detailed. just a good flash. But seriously kill that music, right now.
chillwhale responds:
ok everyone i iwll change the muzic ! it isn't as anoying when the loop dosn't stop like that... it dosn't when i just watch the .swf on my computerbut i will get a better loop
so its a review you want.......................
ok! here's some constuctive critisizm, i hope it helps!!!:
1. The animation was fairly good-better than i could do! so well done
2. The sound got a bit annoying- it suited the theme, but try and find something that doesn't repeat ovr.
3. It was good, but random- u need a bit of a storyline-or sumthin 2 explain wats happening
4. OVERALL: good job. i enjoyed it but a movie either has 2 be short and funny-or have sum storyline or something 2 let ppl no watz going on!!!!!! remake it, make it longer and change the music and it'll be really good