Hi tankman
Its preety good but it dosent relly make sence.
Hi tankman
Its preety good but it dosent relly make sence.
Not long enough... music overtakes the VO
The Voice overs are overtaken by the music and there really wasn't anything to this... sorry.
lol i know your getting this a lot but...
i kow your gettng this a lot but sorry it sucked stick to music your ok at that this waswell blah
...uh...
It wasnt very good. The voices were hard to hear. It was very short. Maybe Fix the voices and repost so people can hear them. It wasnt complete crap just a little rough. Polish 'er up a bit. 3/10
Sorry, but...
Even taking into account that being your first flash, it was pretty bad. I don't wanna sound like a jerk, though. I couldn't really tell what they were saying, but what I caught every now and then wasn't funny at all. The music was okay, but not fitting the animation really. Also, the people were okay-looking. So basically, make the dialogue longer, louder, and more funny.