hmmm
it's funny
hmmm
it's funny
Not Bad, But Not Great!!!
This one was really funy, and surprised me. I only had two problems with it though.
There were no voices or any kind of music. I can understand not having people to do it for u, there should have at least been some kind of music though.
Ryoko > Ayeka
I liked the art. Do you have a thing for Ayeka? You should add some voices and actual animation. Ryoko
Very good artwork, I Would have liked a voiceover though or something.
Comic strip?
Well, pretty nicely drawn and all that, BUT it had no sound, nothing moved and it was pretty short (wich doesnt really count as a bad thing). Try doing it as a comic strip on deviantart or sumtin instead of as a flash on newgrounds (I think itd be better that way)... Thats about it. Ive seen worse stuff.