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Reviews for "Dear Diary Episode One"

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child mollestation,srry michael jackson phase !!!!!!!!!!!!:):(:>:<<<>><><>

lol

its the second time u have uploaded this one huh?? hehe well this time i gave u a tumbs up to see if it doesn't get blammed...

on your next entry
try making animations-not just drawings
sound its ok
try making a better plot

cya

Hmmmmmm...

I think if you were to partner up with another animator, that may or may not help! I didn't see much improvement from the preview to this, so I can only assume that they were both made simultaneously! I think if you went back to the "drawing board", & worked on the animation yourself, you might be able to hone your skills! I mean, that really is the best way to graduate skill! But don't give up... I still think you have something here! Ciao!

Brill mate!

Better than last 1 cos it's longer obviously. I don't see why this should get blammed, the humour's much better. Obviously, improve on graphics. Take a lot more time over it, you using flash yeah?

bleeding-spaz responds:

I'm Using Flash, I'm Was Just Rushing And In A Hurry, But Now, Animation And Penicls. Episode Two Not Coming Soon. Instead, I Will Work On It.

Well.

This has potential.
Just animate. Buy a decent microphone, because nothing is more irritating than crappy voice-acting.
Add a replay button. You never know.
Keep up the good work!

bleeding-spaz responds:

There Was A Flaw, If You Were to Play It OVer Again And Wait Till The End. Right Click Then Press Forward. It Will Take You Too A Scene i Should HAve Taken OutWith A Replay Button.