AWSOME!
that was so funny!
AWSOME!
that was so funny!
coulda bhen better but 4 a new flash nice
just never give up
if u build it thay will come
over all watch able few puns of funnie parts
Well...
I'd say that that was moderatly funny, maybe a chuckle or two at the most... At least it wasn't intirely boring... good luck getting through the judgement phase, this one will be tough...
not bad
woulda bin hilarious if the "we make ur pokemon happy like this " was pikachu bangin misty lol
I thought you actually had a good idea
However, this "commercial" was awefully boring to watch, mind you it is your 1st flash, it could have been a hit.
A few suggestions -
- Use a higer framerate, like 24 fps.
- If you're using sprites, thats fine, but try to be more fluid with your tweening:
like easing, and zooming in and out.
- Make the overall style a bit more cornier, since commercial is what you're aiming for. Instead of sliding pictures, try to make it POP-OUT at me, with more interesting backround effects.
- If you are willing to go the extra step, use voice actors, even your own voice if you're up to it.
Good luck with your flash creations...
- Chaos
Thanks for the suggestions!
I think that I may someday update the flash once I get a better at this.
Your advice will help lots.