Wow!
Very nice! I like it!
Reviews for "MyAntonia: The Train Ride"
So this is where you have been.
's good.
Full of hope
From this, your series looks very promising. The animations were decent, the drawings were good, your "camera" anglings were above average, and your music choice was decent. Please tho, don't rely on the computer-voices. Those take alot of teh seriousness out of a flash. Go with your own, if u can get better at voice acting it can only help u. cant wait to see more from this series, it looks like it will do well.
I like where this is goin
...but I'd like to see more.
Here's some things.
1. You have the load, but no play button. Try to add that in your next flash.
2. The art was good. Your character drawing needs improvement, unless they were meant to be that way.
3. Music was beautiful, but the train conductor's voice was nasty! I don't care, use a crappy microphone if you have to!
Overall, the flash needs to be lenghtened and character audio improved, but I kinda liked this already. Bring it on bro!
Nice Flash
I would have perfered some voice acting but the flash was still good. I read this book last year for English, i was a junior, and I hated it. One of the worst books ever, right there next to the scarlet letter, but i like your flash. Good job.