Nicely done.
After viewing this movie, I agree with the others. Although you have a few spelling errors... the comic relief really covers that.
But I have to ask... How did Alloy end up getting stuck in the door?
Reviews for "Metroid Defusion Part 1"
BlackArmsGeneral responds:
It was a play on how in the orignal Metroid, you could get stuck in the doors to move to the "secret" worlds
really good
im not an expert or anything at reviewing flash since i haven't learned how to do flash but it was really good keep up the good work
Pretty Good
Work on your spelliing and animation, like walking, and you'll become better in no time.
Pretty good
As everyone has said, your spelling is a little off. Nothing is wrong with that-I have seen much worse. I suggest the use of any word processor, and spell check. Grammar check, too, because we all know how bad spell check alone is.
As for your animation itself, it was a good sprite flash. Nothing wrong with the flash itself, except maybe that it was a little short.
BlackArmsGeneral responds:
This is not a reply to the above user only, but to all who have reviewed.
Thank you, to be honest, I was afraid to post the flash here due to all the flaming I see going on sometimes.
Thank you all for sitting through the whole thing!
Note: It's not supposed to be a secret on who the main bad guy is, I did it like that to make it so the characters "Can't tell" who it is, but thanks fo the advice!
TOO SHORT.
Too short. But other than that and the spelling errors, you did pretty good. I hope part 2's gonna be good.