Pretty good.
You had some problems with the text, me being a grammar nazi and all, but it was pretty good. Your animation retold the story very nicey. c:
Reviews for "Hare and the Tortoise."
Darkaxl responds:
Yeah, i'm usual anal about those things but i guess i let a few slip through it'll be updated pretty soon so it won't be like that forever =].
A few problems
The scene where the Hare is running over the hills in the start, when he runs by and we get a glimpse of him, not just smoke clouds, his legs didn't move. I hope you weren't just lazy and that theres a glitch. Also, very nice work with text scenes, like an old cartoon. I personally think you should have done black and white to fit that mood. Few spelling errors, and I also caught on too how dumb the Hare looked. Overall, it was a nice retelling of the story. Good job, and good luck too you.
Good animation.
A good remake of the classic tale.
Slow and Steady
Just as the story is told, well done and nicely animated! :)
Darkaxl responds:
Thankyou for the review.
good
The movement of the tortoise was a little crude and there were a couple of errors in the word slides, but I think overall you did a really good job.
Darkaxl responds:
Yeah the walk cycle seemed to have bugged for some reason i'm in the process of fixing it so once again thank for the review <3.