Aaaww!!
Too bad for the bird :(
but nice (and cute) animating!!! ^^
Reviews for "Bird"
eyy
eyy dis is a reeli kool movi i think it is reeli gud cos of da sound efects and da guys in it like you drew dem gud like da man n da bird. gud use of tools such as the paintin tool wen u made da bird screem i neerly shit mi pants LOL. mayb if u put sum more stori line in it lik the dungeon master dat chops da kids hed off for killin da beast coz da dungon master wanted to do it but den da kids frend cums and kills da dungon master in his lair and steals lots of his fings den hes rich.
il giv u sum tips....................
- mayb u cood use a beter stori line such as i sed up dere ^^^^
- hav more cute animals in it to make it lil more cutey
- hav sum thig in a place and call dat plase jake bars
- mayb mak anotha on lik a seqel lik lord of da rings but made on flash and animated but you cood have da too towers and stuff and have 3 movis
- u shood put a guy from shrek in it im thinking lord faquad cos he makes me laff a lil bit cos hes a lil prince LOL
i fink dats all for dis tim
catch ya l8r
MuleHaze responds:
YES!
hahahahah
lol, i agree with silverscorpion about the guy below him ahhahahah
Not bad for a practice flash.
I enjoyed this flash, to be honest.
Specially because it had a pigeon :3 But anyway, even if the plot wasn't the great thing, but the animation wasn't bad. The art and drawings are good, you can still improve, but next time, use a higher FPS rate. I highly recommend you to use at least 25 if you want a smooth animation. Still is OK.
Conclusion: Keep practicing ;)
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***Pigeonmaster88***
weird
but kinda funny, it was a decent animation.
guy below me... please stop talking like you're a foreign-8-year-old-who-cant-spell-pro per-words