What the Chuff was all that about
What can you say about that good part was that the back grounds looked like mario backgrounds. But then they might have just been screen shots. if they were then knock two off. Also make sure your sprite leaves the page next time. Just look sloopy. Unless that is what you where going for. But some real gold in here none the less
Erm... :/
I really dont get it. Try to up yr flash skill, and then draw something like that again
Not Good.
I'm sorry but this video was very low quality. You should think about how you are using your sounds, voices, movement, etc. I don't know how much time and effort was put into this, but it could sure use some work.
just horrible...
didnt like it....no preloader or replay button...
and on top of that i decided to see the first movie and it was exactly the same!
if you made a different one i think you loaded the wrong one...
still sounds, graphics...all terrible
my advice: play around with flash animation a bit more...dont sumbit stuff that looks half-done like this was... in other words get better at sprite flash, best advice i know to give
to be honest... it looks like u just threw it together blindly and crossed your fingers...i mean no offense but that's what it looks like to me
i see a lot of sprite movies and i'll tell you this....this wont cut it at all... work on your skills more, and come back with something better.
more like where was your flash going??
This animation was judt random bits of sprites flying around a screen. Im supprised if anyone could understand what was going on in your flash. There was no flow to this at all. Your flash jumped from one scene to another with no explenation with what is going on, such as wario and sonic going down the pipe, then there was an explosion.? To gain even the slightest respect from a sprite movie what you need is some sort of plot and flows. I think what you need to do is go back to basics and make a simple flsh with mario and sonic fighting with nice moving sprites and good use of animation such as mario fireing a fireball. The two stars came from the little fight at the end, which was the only part that made sense. A key factor to a good flash is to end it with something simple which closes up all loose ends. Although thats what you did anyone could have done the same and written words. Put all of this together the quality of your next flash will be substantially better