He had to suffer
was it necessary to make him hurt
sometimes the story doesnt make sense
but it still is good
i was interested all through the video
i cant wait till the third
Reviews for "Planetoid - Chapter 2"
Fate responds:
If you tell me where it doesn't make sense, I'll know where to improve.
It was sort of necassary to make him hurt, to make you feel for the character.
great
great job i enjoyed it more than the first becasue it was easier to follow
the effects were great
keep up the good work and looking foward to the thrid
Fate responds:
I'm glad SOMEBODY picked up on the special effects.
they took up a fair chunk of time, and space.
and I'm glad it was easier to follow.
that's what I strived for.
I'll have to do a third one now.
Quite captivating.
Ah, it's so difficult to review this because I've already told you most of my thoughts on this already, haha, and I dislike repeating myself. As I've said, it was very cinematic, and created a great deal of suspense with the unfolding events. I was incredibly impressed (like before) with the special effects and particularly pleased with the lighting effects when he crashed on that mysterious planet, which was something I hadn't seen before. The light was very vivid, and very realistic. I can tell how much work you put into all the shading and the explosions and the various 3D shapes, so I'm really glad that it turned out well. It's getting to be quite an interesting little series and I can't wait for number three. Well done.
Fate responds:
Heh, thanks.
I wouldn't have minded if you'd repeated things, because then they're out in the open, and not in my inbox :P
You only originally only saw up too...him crashing into the tree, I think, so I guess you wouldn't have seen the blue planet...
an improvement on him 'opening his eyes'? :P
So random-ish
I guess it had a story, but none the less I loved everybit of it!
The end was really classy :)
I suggest fixing the preloader, then editing it in "your flash submissions" page, or at least put instructions on how to skip the preloader..
Other then that, it's amazing!
Fate responds:
The preloader works enough.
you just have to wait for it to finish loading, and it comes up with the 'play' button, it just doesn't show the progress.
...'random-ish'...hmmm
But I'm glad you liked the ending.
and thanks for the 10.
nice man ;)
I love the effects in there, and the music fits great. Really good job! The story is a bit hard to follow, like zero123music said, but nonetheless, 5/5, 10/10 ;) I don't mind the preloader. It looks great, that's enough for me.
Mjattie
Fate responds:
:D Thanks.
Yeah, I'm starting to feel that it must've been difficult to follow.
Obviously, to me, I know what's going on, so I don't realise.
But I've put as much effort into the third one as i can to make sure this doesn't happen again.
Thanks for the review.