not bad
this is quality art you have here. try a little more frame by frame stuff and this will go far. also, try to create your own characters and story lines. nice work buddy, is this your first one? if it is, it's really good for a first one. good luck passing judgement :D
as someone told me
you need a lot more keyframes for it to look smooth, it was a pretty good attempt though but i cant say much because my first flash looks alot like this and i did all my sound effects by mouth lol
Not too bad.
The animation was jerky, the sound was sub-par, and the humor lacked tact, but all in all, it was a good job for a training flash.
In other words: Work at it. You can and will make better things. I smell potential.
ok..
its ok but can you plz use english for the text because 80% of the earth understand english and it would help alot if you could do that
and if you could .. do a amazing battle and make us choose a winner
Thoroughly Average
You need a preloader, the animation was really jerky, Far too short and was that supposed to be funny? cause it wasn't. You get a 5 cause its better than at least 3 quarters of the crap that gets through (*Cough*kittykrew*cough*)
Maybey use English or have English subtitles next time