Reviews for Ask A Clock v.2

[lgnxhll]

glad too help

yayyy

[aparanoidbw]

penis ---> NO

I got no...not "hell yes" after typing everything else and getting a yes.

piggy123 responds:

noooooooooo

[Step]

Variety...

I got bored of this pretty quickly. It's just typing in some question and the clock answers randomly...

The artwork wasn't too special. The clock looked strange, the box didn't go in line with the word 'GO' and the background would be more original if you made it yourself. Also, the text at the top was a little hard to read, although it's pretty cool that it could tell you your name, anyway...

The idea isn't bad, but there should be more variety for the answers. If you're not planning to make it a proper chat bot (that'd take ages :P), then vary your answers a lot more, and make it answer properly for some simple words (like if you say 'hello', it says 'hello', if you say 'bye', it says 'bye', if you say 'hey, look there!', it says 'I can't. I'm just a drawing.', etc.).

The fact that there wasn't really any sound in it bugged me a little. Some music would help take away the repetitiveness of the game.

Overall, not such a bad idea, and you have the concept of it, but a neater layout, more variety and some sound would definitely help.
6/10
3/5

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piggy123 responds:

ok thanks i will have it ready for next clock day!

[Frenzy]

Ask A Review v.2

Well it was definitely a good idea, but it only worked if you asked yes or no questions to it. It was cool that it detected your name, and the graphics wren't bad, but when I asked 'what is your name?' and get the answer 'maybe' it's a little disheartening.

5/10
~ Z
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piggy123 responds:

thanks i like your review

[Fro]

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~ Animation/Graphics ~

Graphic wise this wasn't too bad at all. The picture of Strawberry clock wasn't bad, but it wasn't terrible. Background looked nice and the text that was used was easy to read and very fitting. I think that you could have worked with the text so it fits around names properly though because with only Fro written there was way too much space on either side of it.

~ Story/Content ~

A good idea for a Clock Day flash. It could have used a bunch of other answers because I would tend to get the same answer a couple of times in a row every now and then and it wasn't too long until I found them all. Perhaps throwing in like 10 to 20 more funny/witty answers would have made this better and probably would increase the score a bit.

~ Audio ~

Why not the spammy Clock Day voice that people use for their submissions so that Strawberry talks when a question is asked and he's answering it. That along with some decent background music.

~ Overall ~

With a little bit improved artwork, a series of more funny/witty comments, and a voice over along with some background music and I could be giving this a 6 or 7 out of 10.

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piggy123 responds:

thanks for the only good review fro