kinda short
also its sound affects are annoyingly stock sounding
Reviews for "Smal animation"
Not bad; but needs more
This is an alright animation, but it seemed lacking. Perhaps you could add some color, a background, and more complex motions next time. That would definitely enhance the quality of your work.
lolwut
what the hell was that ? I mean, the animation looks good and all but I just don't get it.
ummm
"lolwut" i was about to say the same i just don't get the message adding some color to the animation would be great but its okay
Not bad, not to great though.
I like your art styling, however I believe you could do a lot more with this animation.
Plot/character development is possibly the most important and attention grabbing thing possible. Try adding some dialogue :). Your art style could easily become something many others could become interested in, so expand the animation, and do more to catch the eyes of the fellow newgrounders ^_^!
RobbanFoxer responds:
well... im working on a full flash animation but... i still cant everything in flash "still goes on lessons" So the only problem i have is how to make BG music stop.