Reviews for Adrellia Village #34

[KingChameleon]

music

lol dragonforce

[kurtisawesome123]

Awesome Music!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome Music!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Knuckstrike]

Great

I haven't seen all of the episodes, but from what I've seen is that the animation has really improved.
Although the video quality is worse than in some other episodes the characters and backgrounds are actually moving, and there are not many loops for the animation. The main character actually moves through the different backgrounds, what you didn't have in many other episodes.

The things that were good in the previous episodes apply here too. The nice voice acting and good atmosphere are here too.
The story progressed quickly too, which is always a plus

Altogether this is IMO one of your best episodes yet.

MistyE responds:

Thanks. Importing a video into Flash gave this a fuzzy quality. I appreciate your review!

[Haggard]

Hmm

There was a huge problem with the voices here. All of them had static noises, as if they where recorded too loud. This really hurts this flash movie, which was funny otherwise.

I liked the thought bubbles of Drake, Rachel and Sebastian during Brutus' speech, they added a lot of comedy value.

Also I think it's a bit lame to have Drake (and maybe the other characters as well?) mirrored when they look to the right side. It's clearly visible that Drake is mirrored, because the writing on his shit is mirrored as well.

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MistyE responds:

Thanks. The idea of making Adrellia Village comedic and satirical rather than serious and suspenseful occured to me when this was made, and Brutus' tiresome speech was something I felt had to be funnier.

Drake mirrored here was truly a sign of laziness on my part, the other episodes don't have mirrored text.

[Coop]

Audio let it down

I like this piece and the plot being exposed quickly, with little fuss, though the audio was one big carbuncle, which sapped the enjoyment from me, during this piece.

For the audio quality, I'd suggest that you start by either getting better recording equipment (I'm not sure this is an issue), or recording a little further from the microphone and spending some time equalising it, to get the most from it.

I think that the plot is good, as are some of the jokes. I would have preferred the guys to walk in the opposite direction of the arrow and then come back past it, heading where the arrow points, with the wizard saying "What do you know, he must be smarter than he looks."

There is a good chance to take this further and I'd like to see that done, but I'll reserve judgement, until I've seen a little more of the series itself, as I'm still relatively new to this.

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MistyE responds:

Thank you! The "he's smarter than he looks" suggestion will work great actually. I appreciate your review, and to grasp the entire plotline, watching the previous episodes is important. From episodes 1-12 I recapped all of the important parts but then I trashed that idea for some reason.