Reviews for Super bird

[EmptyOrange]

Awesome!

The animation was really smooth, and I liked the panning back and forth between the two characters :) Great job!

[TreasurePlanet]

nice

this is good.
Not only is it a great start but it's a good flash animation.
keep it up.
this cite needs more like this.

Dipflow responds:

Thanks, I appreciate it :)

[FellStraylight]

Good, however

That is one creepy fucking bird.

BTW love the sound effects.

Dipflow responds:

I actually had a lot of fun mouthing these sound effects, even though they were recorded in a hurry and the quality is poor (especially the grey guy laughing - i hate the sound of his laugh btw :D).
Still thanks for the compliment and input.

[SwordStriker]

For a Beginner

Not Bad. But there is alot of stuff you need to fix, like the speed and that(Like you said). And in the future i hope to see more work from you ;)

Dipflow responds:

I hope i start dishing out some new stuff soon, too!
Thank you.

[nyip-nyip]

Nice, but short...

Hey, nice job for your 3rd flash. Your movie wasn't bad, but it needed a lot of improvement.

First: You need to find sound FX! Your mouth sounded very, very cheesy.
Second: Work on timing. The bird snoring took up too much time and the squirrel thing laughing and getting his egg took too long as well.
Third: Give your movie a plot. Make it longer. This sort of short seemed very unoriginal.

I did enjoy your art. It was a little rough, but I can tell that with practice you'll be able to build it up. Keep workin' at flash and be creative!

Dipflow responds:

The horrific sound effects are going to be replaced by actual ones in future submissions, atleast i'll try :)
About the plot, i totally agree and the only reason this came out as it did, story-wise,
is that i made up what was next as i animated, i think for the next flash i'll write down my thoughts, maybe even try to think of the camera shots, then work based on that.
Thank you for the response!