Reviews for Blink of an Eye--_--(1:00)

[DavidOrr]

Great Job once again

Another great piece (or great start, anyway). I would suggest different notes when the pedaling bassline comes in. I generally like to use the 1 of every chord, it helps give the piece stability and solidifies the chordal structure.

So, instead of mainly pedaling E, start off with A, and then go to F and G (replace E with A). I think that would really improve the piece, although a simple chage. It's all in one's tastes though, so what I may like you may not, and vice versa. Do whatever you hear. It is your piece, after all :).

This could be a nice little trancey work if finished. You could really develop the melody if you wanted to, you gave yourself a lot to work with.

Keep it up, and hang in there!

5/5

PERVOK responds:

Thanks man for the encouraging review. You know, I just think that I'll tinker with this song... lets see how long I can make it! >:D

I'll try to break my previous record of 12 minutes. Man, that song was amazing.
Well, my brother told me that. I just thought it was like one of my normal songs, just 12 minutes long.

LETS BREAK SOME FUCKING RECORDS HERE >:D

[cornandbeans]

i'll try an actual review :P

I liked the slide synth you used, sounds pretty sweet. I'm right about at the part when you switch into that second part at the end. It sounds like you have a little slide on that, too. :D Too bad its short :( I wanted it to keep going. Keep working on it. I really like it.

~cornandbeans

PERVOK responds:

Ai sir! That I shall!

Lots of tinkering this song is going to recieve in the future... *Rapist grin*

[Father-of-Death]

POOP

dang i wasn't the first to review...oh well...

i love this song it really soothes you ( like you said below...) but it's true though w/e

it gives you tinkles down your spine...and makes you wanna cry but not really...it's very cunfusing...sounds sad and but then it sounds like you got some relief...i sound like a hippy LOL! XD

wut eva 5/5 of course ~_~

p.s. i gotta new song "Batteries not included"
can you check it out and tell me if it sounds good for a game??? cuz i really want my stuff to be submited in a game!=)

--_-- VOTE 4 ZENON --_-- what ever the fuck that's suposed to mean...

[dj-Nate]

Wow!

Very good song! Ctachy and had my head bopping!! Check my stuff if you get the chance... I hate to ask other artists that, but these damn people who vote zero on my stuff never lets my stuff be noticed, so hopefully this'll help...

So 10/10, 5/5, DL!

-Nate

PERVOK responds:

Ai, seems like everyone wants a review from good ol' Zenon...

...I'll see if my brain doesn't give out on this beautious night, so I can give you a review.

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