Nice!
It's so blank and dull though.
Reviews for "my first animation.. EVER"
Even though it was short and without music...
I sincerely loved the animation. Also, the idea behind the artwork, the tears forming into a face and the beautifully drawn maiden. I can sincerely say you have a bunch of talent. Newbie or no, I believe you have a bunch of potential. Keep practicing!
shoot better than mine.
My first animation was horrible!!!!! So what if it was short and has no music or sfx or anything, this is a great start! And it seems like you are a very talented artist as well! I WANT to see more from you, and I don't think you will improve, I KNOW you will improve! You have a lot of potential!
Good Try
This is a good try for your first animation ever. Keep up the good work. Next time make your work longer. I look forward to seeing more from you.
Notbad
Well this ws something nifty and different I like the drawing side of it but this could be so much better with some color some audio or music and also think about adding a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" to stop the looping.
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This would be alot better with some added audio and or sound/fx, no sound at all kinda just brings the quality down, so add something of sound and you have a wide selecion in the audio portal at your desposal. It seemed like an interesting idea on it's own, but it was rather short, which took away from the humor a bit,This was really short, so maybe adding more to it and or adding more short clips to this entry making it a longer more fuller flash submission, so its an idea. maybe adding a few short ones on this one entry would be a better choice. So i see that this movie starts and loops, you can fix that with a stop action code, what that does is stop the loop and it will play when the user/viewer clicks on the play button, now you should have a play button and a replay button aswell, anyways just an idea to make this better.
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