A nice play on the stick figures wearing period helmets. Also liked the animation style itself, seemed to be a mix of flash and old gameboy graphics. A good first flash submission, I hope the next ones are longer.
Reviews for "Syssitia"
Lympha responds:
Thank you, it's not animated with Flash, it's made with a very limited program, called Pivot, you might have heard of it. I'll try to give the next one more length.
I'm not a huge fan of stick movies, but I can say that I like how smooth the animation is. I would've liked it a little longer, though.
Lympha responds:
I'll try to make an animation with more length in the future.
smooth but short.
get it long enough to have a decernible plot and I will enjoy it alot more.
Lympha responds:
I'll do my very best.
3/5 5/10. For a stick animation, this doesn't have enough to it. I like that you have taken some
creative license by adding interesting weapons and what not. Keep practicing, and remember, don't make the same crap everyone else does, use your ability to be creative, that's what flashimations are all about.
Lympha responds:
Keep in mind that I wasn't using Flash, but Pivot. The difference is incredibly big.
Thank you for the criticism, I always try to make my animations creative.
There's an issue with the audio continuing to loop after the animation is over, which carries on and overlaps itself after clicking to replay. Quite a problem.
Aside from the technical issue, it was fairly well animated stick-violence. Nice job. I'd go back and change the audio from 'event' to 'stream', though. (I'm pretty sure that's what would resolve your problem, anyway) This is a good start, though.
Could also use a story. People love stories.
Lympha responds:
Thank you, I followed your advice and it should be fixed now.