I like the style of the drawings! I would love to see more in this style. I like the music, though as for the dreamy shots, i would have chosen for something more...dreamy music :P
Reviews for "Bitter"
PIED3 responds:
Hmm, i wanted to have create a grand and menacing feeling with the music but i suppose the slow shots caused some disparity betweeen elements. Thanks for the 10 and review!
I enjoyed it,
Had a real old school experimental feel to it
PIED3 responds:
Glad you did!
It's a bit short, but an interesting abstract work.
I find it odd that this isn't getting more attention.
PIED3 responds:
Thanks
The lack of focus, plot-wise, and visually, was a good choice. Audio was majestic and spiritual, like a spiritual and majestic lion.
PIED3 responds:
Ah, a majestic and spritual lion, that is wonderful! Thank you very much for the review.
Nice atmosphere!
I concur with what Zanroth said on this regarding the lack of recognition. However, I would like to see your Bokeh technique applied to something more substantial.
Animation: The animation wasn't the real focus on this, but it was some decent FbF combined with clever tweening. As for the Bokeh effect, it was well done though I would advise you to go easy on the filters. Did I mention that you also made some nice color choices?
Music: It wasn't much, but that default midi was alright for a test such as this.
Content: This is the only thing that I didn't like about this. It wasn't bad by any means, but due to the fact that it was a tech demo; there wasn't much in terms of content. With that being said, you did a great job on setting an atmosphere with this.
[+]
-Nice use of texture
-Decent animation
-Good tone
-Fitting color selection
[-]
-Music could have been better in terms of atmosphere
-The fact that this is a demo
Overall: Here's an eight out of ten from me, and just keep at it. (4/5)
PIED3 responds:
Thank you very much for the detailed review! Fair comments throughout and nothing i disagree with you on. Cheers for the 8