Reviews for Splice of Life (NATA)

[Hikarian]

That was awesome! I'm amazed at how much you've been able to accomplish during such a short period. The only thing that I can think of when it comes to constructive criticism is that I didn't really find it clear what you and your sister (?) were fighting over until the end. Maybe you could've made that more clear with a silhouette shot of the missing pen or something like that, but it might just be me that wasn't observant enough.

Just one more thing... doesn't your entry have to be tagged with "nata2012open" to be considered a submission? Can't see that tag at the moment. It would be a shame if all that hard work were to go to waste :(

Pahgawk responds:

Oh wow I can't believe I forgot that. Thanks so much for reminding me!

Yeah, I guess I left it a bit too unclear at first. I was originally planning to try to make it look like they wanted the timeline merger device so that there would be more of a misunderstanding about what they were fighting for, but I guess I just confused things a bit too much.

Thanks for the review! I can't wait to see yours :)

[DaAtheno]

Wow, beat me by a long shot, I'm pretty sure you don't have to worry about making it past the open round sir because you sure pwned!

Pahgawk responds:

Thanks!

[SwagMuffin]

really liked it, reminds me off eddsworld.

[dylan123123123]

*applause*

[Jimmmny]

Much funnier than your other stuff, but just as cool, only thing i'd mention is that the "time machine" seems pretty useless to me and not a time machine at all for that matter... but i think weirdly and it's probably just me so i'm just gonna ignore that little detail.
5/5