Really great man
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Really great man
As you're first animation this is pretty good, I think you have some potential as a good animator. If I were to give you any advicce though, I would suggest that you try your best to avoid using overused soundtracks such as as that music from INCEPTION. But since this is your first flash animation I think I can cut you some slack and at least you picked a song that matched the tension of your story's background. There's little need for improvement here, so keep up the hard work and I'm sure you will be a popular animator faster than you might expect. 4.5/5 Stars
If it's your first animation its realy good 5/5 but if you done about 10-15 animations 3.5/5 i like this that its little bit interactive very good make more animations like that
It was decent.
The animation was okay, pretty much just tweens, the voice acting was good, but not very timed with the animation, and you should use a preloader.
preloader, hm? thanks, i'll keep it in mind
I thought it was quite good, especially for your first flash. I would suggest that you maybe make it more obvious when you want users to click something in a movie. You showed instances where your art was just great, but just dropped that awesome style in other parts. Nonetheless I liked it.