this is very good i liked i you did a good job but whed tails shout his name adzactly
Reviews for "Encountering Knuckles "
Codeman160 responds:
It was more of an excited shout when a kid meets someone new.
Not bad, honestly. Text boxes could be a little nicer though.
that actually was not bad at all. wasn't funny but i don't feel like that anything was meant to be funny. I liked the storyline and would like to know how it ends. I also liked that they talked to eachother in a manner that seemed possible with the characters. Very good
Codeman160 responds:
If you haven't already known, this is based off the video game scene on Sonic & knuckles. So if you've already played the game, you should already know how it ends, lol. if you haven't then maybe I'll think about making the next part.
i thought it was good. i dont know what you mean by camera problems but heres what i thought you could do different: when sonic was bouncing off all the walls then hit knuckles i thought it would look better to zoom out so you could see the whole screenshot and zoom back in to knuckles as sonic comes flying back at him. The text bubbles could of been more stylized to look like the animation or part or the series (the sonic franchise), and lastly is when they fall through the floor, show what happen to the floor. did it crumble underneath them or did robotnik do something. again these are opinions to nelp not hurt or impead your creativity, good luck in the future.
Codeman160 responds:
About the crumbling of the floor. I really didn't know how to do that, that's why it just cut to them falling.
It wasn't that bad. Don't use those giant text boxes, try just using colored bold lettering at the bottom. For any examples of what I'm talking about check out any subbed anime.
Codeman160 responds:
I wanted to make the texts easier to read, that's why I did what I did. If you could suggest another way of making dialog, message me please.