Your art style... I understand. I draw like that too. ADHD?
I will say that, perhaps you are more of a 3 dimensional artist? I tried drawing for years like everyone else and all I ever came up with was gibberish. But then I found Google Sketch-up and I found that I can make 3-d art really well. Perhaps you have a similar art bend.
OR...
... perhaps you just need to practice, practice, practice... or maybe you just didn't care for this flash and threw together some random lines.
EITHER WAY...
I liked this one. The art style was not something spectacular but, it mixed well with the theme of this flash and the music. I actually liked this one, it was fairly interesting.