Beautiful. Consistent, subdued yet persistent mood throughout.
Music at the end very good. Wish I knew what the end quote was referring to, was it the use of the H-Bomb during WW2? Not sure how that might fit into the overall story/setting of the game but still nice.
My only complaint would be the spelling mistakes but I didn't take any points off because I imagine english isn't your native tongue. My only other issue would be the length/depth of story but in a way, short and sweet is better for this type of thing and the more in-depth you go with a thing like this the more you have to define it, and it's better left more open to interpretation. Very nice, thank you.