Would love to see a finished version!
Reviews for "Aventuras de Mateus Beta"
Ethmus responds:
Coming soon, i hope to publishing the full version. If you have some suggestion or idea send to me please. Regards.
What you have hints at something decent in the future, but this is nowhere near ready to be put up. There's just not enough to it yet.
With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies are completed? Think about it.
If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.
http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission
Good luck. :)
The controls are okay, but it could use a little work. music too.
Ethmus responds:
Thanks, please give me all feedbacks, i'm a newer developer and had a long way to do a good game. Tks a lot.
It doesn't look bad at all. I'm assuming there are going to be enemies in the game since you can throw bombs. This might sound weird but I liked the triple jump.
I wouldn't suggest adding unfinished works to the portal.
You have better luck getting feedback at the community forums.