good artwork, and kinda strange, but original story.
is this set in the future? (if i judge from the domes...)
and is it in a post-apocalyptic era? (if i judge from the BROKEN domes....)
good work, nice action, good movie.
would like to watch more of this....
haha thanks so much!
and yea, it sorta is. i kinda have a lot planned out, hopefully it will end up being half as good as i imagine it though.
Its ok but audio needs to be better :o
yea i know, -.-
any recording software you could recommend?
The animation needs some polishing. I'm grateful that every time I thought you were going to end the story with a simpler little gag you pushed it forward; that made the time worth it.
The acting seems to need more emotion, it sounded like when someone is trying to repeat something she or he heard or imagined rather than something that is happening in that moment. Perhaps when recording the actor tried not to be to loud because of the equipment placement or because of shyness. In any case, I wish you get past it.
Keep up the good work.
thanks for your honest comment, yea, i know i still got to work on a lot of things but im actually really happy the people here on newgrounds are pretty nice and very down to earth. Im new here and im starting to get why so many animators i watch on youtube talk so highly of this site.
As for the voice acting, both your statements are correct. I record in my little dorm room which has an echo if you talk loud enough, and im still new to "voice acting" thing (if you want to say what i did was voice acting haha) so in some parts i actually change the script a bit so im not voicing a scene waay out of my capabilities (like emotional stuff), but yea i hope to get better too. oh and thanks again for the comment, more stuff coming real soon :)
This was interesting.
we are all interesting.
This was just wonderfully, wierd, the animation was a tad choppy, but I think that only lent to the charm. My only problem is the voice acting, it's kinda wooden, and the screams and grunts of pains are just kinda whispers.
yea -.- sorry about that. this is probably going to be a rough patch of my animations for a little bit but i hope it gets better with time. thanks for the comment and the follow, your the first. yeeeeey (that yey was mono toned, like my voicing haha....for now)