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Reviews for "Vetri"

one of the best movies i have seen
perfect humor and nice exprecions
its long and soo people can see you put alot of work on it
really well done
this goes to my favorites

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

Thanks a lot davidpuralocura and really glad you enjoyed it! :D Feels great to know it was one of the best movies you've seen and makes me feel like the amount of work I put into it was worth it in the end!

You did great. From what I had seen from the message, and what you done since your last animation. It deserves a 5 stars.

Talent comes differently to one, to another. Some easy to find, some hard. All it takes is observation, and someone there that can guide someone in the right path.

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

Cheers, thanks a lot thunder-of-light :D Really appreciate it!

This was extremely well done. The lighting was awesome, the storytelling was awesome, the models were great. The my only problem with this was the animation itself was a tad awkward in a few places and needed a bit of polishing. Also, some of the on-screen text flashed by a bit too fast and the last scene where he suddenly starts to understand what's actually happening could have been a tad bit clearer on what everything meant. Still, those were minor problems for an overall awesome short.

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

Thanks ForceApplied for the useful review :D I was also a little bit unsure whether people would understand that final scene and I guess that is due to poor planning. I will work on this and hopefully come up with a better story along with animation.

The twist on the ending was really good, but i have to watch it twice to really get it. Anyway great job the graphics looks amazing and there some things to be polish that many other users already said. Keep it up!!

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

Thanks Le-Siul :) Really glad you liked the ending, although you're right, I should have made the ending more clear.

There's a lot of things to improve and lots of things you're already doing great. I'll just mention one that may help you with future projects.
Animating in scene and animating loops. A lot of the animation of your characters walking or running seem odd because their feet slide. When you can see the feet, If instead of making a walking or running loop and place them instead on the ground step by step, it will not only match but it will make the animation more organic because every pose will be different.

ThilakanathanStudios responds:

Great feedback about animating in scene. Due to the number of characters and the length of film, I felt a little overwhelmed at the amount of animation I had to do. Animating in scene, although time consuming, would probably have given me a better looking result. Something which I'm looking forward to incorporating in my next film. Thanks for this useful suggestion Atzu :)