Heh,
That was a nifty short.
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Reviews for "Flower Girl"
The humor was pretty dry and untimely. Usually you want to contrast your zany characters (the guy on the ground) with level-headed characters, but here they're both on the "lol randum" level that kept me from relating to the characters. But I like the water-color backgrounds and of course the Mac Demarco is always nice to hear.
SwedishPlumTrees responds:
Thanks for the review man. I've been trying to work on my comedy writing. I realize it's not amazing, but I'm going to keep working on it. But Im glad you liked the backgrounds and the Mac Demarco!
Haha, this was really good!
I personally LOVE the way the characters movements play out, and the art style overall. I think this deserves a 10 :)
While everybody else is just making "copy paste" praises on their reviews about how good your art style is (and it is neat don't get me wrong), I'll give some actual genuine remarks about this submission:
I liked the dialogue. the pacing was good and the whole "wuuuut?" factor of the victorian speaking guy was hilarious. And that big thing at the end caught me off guard. Was totally not expecting that. Haha.
SwedishPlumTrees responds:
Haha cool dude. Thanks for the nice words.
Dude this was awesome! Really great art style. I was getting some good Adventure Time vines watching this.
Keep up the good work!