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Reviews for "Owl (Book Three)"

He's done it again.

Owl Three is a great story, much as I have come to expect from the author. It's refreshing to see a gem amongst the tripe that sometimes seems to engulf Newgrounds, with all the 'Clock', 'Anti-Clock', and 'Anti-Anti-Clock' that goes around, as well as the 'My Stick Figures are better than your Stick Figures'. Oz Thomas makes no attempt at appeasing the general audience, but carves out his own niche with surprising effectiveness. I must admit, Owl Three was not as engrossing as Owl One, but it was a good story--although it's hard to believe it's over so soon. =) If you're looking for things you'd typically find on Newgrounds, this isn't it. But if you're looking for a diamond in the rough (and it doesn't get much rougher than Newgrounds... =D), then you will be pleasantly surprised by this submission.

I LOVE THIS

You are very talented. I have seen everythin you have posted on newgrounds. and i am very impressed, GET YOUR WORK PUBLISHED. Make a book and you'll Make it big.

TRUST ME ;) its mi job

Virgilcomic responds:

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Finally...

We see some Portal entries with real style. This
is very well-done in concept and execution. It's
a shame we don't see this sort of visionary work
everyday. I voted a 5 because I want to see more
true art like this.

Good

I don't care what other people say. I thought this was VERY cute. Sure, Newgrounds might be ground zero to a bunch of swearing and sexual puns, but jeez, at least there are a few things with taste around here.

I liked the graphics, loved the story. You should submit it to a publisher.

Great work. A little flawed, but great nontheless

The story of owl and the balance of the work is a remarkable piece or work. This is one of the greatest short stories I have ever read, and while I'm only 16, I have read quite a bit. Oz, you once again capture your readers and create a bond with them and the characters of the story. This being said, the reason I gave the Owl series an 8, is because there were some parts of the story which were in no way related to the overall plot, such as when Owl travels far across the desert to retrieve a leaf for lady owl, and she dies anyway. To save 8 pages or so, why not just have her die more quickly from the poison. This would keep the story progress more quickly and help keep the reader interested.
I'm not a great writer as you are, but I hope you will consider my suggestions, and I look forward to reading more of you work.

Virgilcomic responds:

Thanks for the support and criticism. I am always trying to make my writing better. Persuit of perfection can be maddening, though. :-p