I'd love to see how story develops
Reviews for "A Drunkard's Luck"
I really....want a real full game of this teaser. It seems interesting. I'll wait for youuuuuuuuuuuuu~~~
The game is nice,but nothing special.
Ah yeah also: at the very beggining after you woke up before he says I was robbed,if you move before he says that i will move in the same direction he sould be but he won't say anything and you'll be stucked.Fix that
it isnt a game is there a way to create one does uda creates them or its from human soemthign about pi which dies my otilet got a colour machine or soemthing im blonde ihear all there is jsutcie and a tiolet sound of whell of robo ky as from turnovo how was the wtf collective phane stuff
it gots autonomic code right :? :D
Ok, so we've got the first chapter of a story, essentially. The main strength of this is the sense of mystery- you tease the player, and I want to find out what happens next. Major weakness is English- this needs thorough proofreading, as a text-based game with constant typos and spelling errors is going to put a lot of people off.
Also, if I'm playing as a character, I want to identify with him or like him. Having a grouchy character who keeps saying 'fuck' and asking unanswerable questions is fine, but he needs to be funny or likeable, or unusual with it- your protagonist just seems unpleasant.
I'd be interested to see this if you come back to it.