Man I was so ready to explore this with the team that I forgot how short this was going to be. Narrative ghosting. It's really interesting and honestly immersive, the immersion only broke due to time constraints.
Reviews for "Mixed Feelings"
Very interesting, I'd love to see more!
Nice work here
Very nice "VIEW-SHOTS" nice "STORY" too some really nice elements to this that really made it like a fun little movie, Now as a small improvment here I could see you adding some subtitles just for some extra measure of the story itself, Perhaps with more eye for detail and putting that detail into effect more it will certainly feel and look better, but its just a start on making lots of new endeavors in the movie world ofcourse.
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Now as a small improvment here I could see you adding some subtitles just for some extra measure of the story itself
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It's almost like a pilot! Preview? Teaser? Hope you make something more of this idea! It's got a lot of potential. Great animation, but it ends without really going all the way, IMO.
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fernibbus responds:
This is an idea I’ve been sitting on for a couple years now, and I decided to finally kick in into gear this summer for a student film and animation competition! The deadline kinda snuck up on me (which is visible in the from some of the backgrounds and animation) so it’s not as developed as I’d like it to be story-wise. I’m currently working on a show bible and definitely want to make this a series!
Nice job! It truly felt curious about how this continues, but I don't know if you're planning to turn this into a series. The skeleton is there, I don't know if you'd like to flesh it out. As it is, those were some enjoyable minutes. You could probably improve on some animation details so that it isn't as stiff as it is and on your backgrounds.
fernibbus responds:
I definitely want to make this into a series. As far as the animation and backgrounds go, I was pressed for time because I decided last minute to use this for a student film/animation competition, and agree there definitely could be more lively and clean. There’s always next time though!