just found this. i cant wait for more
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Reviews for "Seafoam Episode 1 - Begin Again"
AphrosAnimation responds:
This means a lot!! Working hard to get the next one out :)
damn this is really cool, i love the style!
Seems average
Awesome, I can sense 'You're style' in this. Keep it going! The idea is interesting, the dialogues and animation could use some improvement tho, However - Nice work!
AphrosAnimation responds:
Thank you! I appreciate that. And yeah, I understand!
Really cool so far, I like the style and the character designs, the VAs all did great, SFX and music are real clean. That being said, at times the pacing can be a little too snappy and hard to follow. For instance, when Alex goes to apply for the cartographer position, the dialogue is awkwardly paced with the scenes, a lot of cutting to different characters and lines being layered in a way that don't naturally cut the other off. Then as she's leaving, Apollo just kinda appears before her. But, most of those problems were just for that initial scene so you're coolin. I think this series will be dope, just need to slow the pacing a bit. Give some of the scenes space to breath. Keep it up though, I'm enjoying it for sure!