Ummm...
The movie looks like it has potential, but where is the sound. It really does not make any sense if you can not here what they are saying. If it is just an error you really need to fix it. It would probably recieve a much higher score. I gave it a 2 because the graphics showed potential but that lack of sound hurt the movie.
Needs some work
Well, it needs more work and better and whats with the loop? Well, this flash can get better so keep it up. BTW, the preloader at newgrounds portal.
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Ok well not sure if its your first or not, but a few things to improve on would be, backrounds, color, storyline, dialog, etc you get the point, but hey its a start, and might wanna add a play button...
MOVIE COMMENTARY: A short drawing style film with a red ball...
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One problem
I couldn't hear anything.
not good
well, the sketches were alright.... but this one wasn't very good. a lot more needed to be done to this one.