I really loved the feel on the intro. It was very uplifting. It made me feel like I just passed my Trig test with a high score, and then Johnny Depp ran up and hugged me, and spun me around, and then I got a puppy, and the puppy ran up and hugged me, and then we had ice cream.
All of us.
That is probably the anagolical review I have ever recieved... Interesting... XDD
Can't say I've ever recieved a more unique and wonderful review XDD
Man that made my day XD
Thank Youuuu!!!! :DDDDD
Omg i can't get over this review XDDDD
Thank you so much, really.... you have no idea how happy that review made me :DD
Yeah I can definitely tell you're improving a lot! You're starting to become a great EDM artist!
Thank you so much for the kind words, Zophar!!!
means alot...
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Really cool! :D
:DD Thankyou Gougou!!! :DD
So, there is stuff to improve in here. From melody and structuring standpoint I dont really have any negatives - its pretty nice and I enjoyed it. Problem I noticed is that at some points bass distorts a little, and drum fills also tend to do this. You probably didnt hear it while working since its rare to hear that in DAW but after exporting in lossy formats like mp3 its very noticeable. Here are specific times of this occurrences:
1:09
2:07
2:50
I think bass is a bit too loud. You might want to sidechain it a bit more to kick and snare, and equalise mid frequencies of it to get it out of the way of rest of the instuments.
Otherwise I liked the song a lot.
Cheers,
- Xent :)
Thank you so much for the review, Xent!
I listened for those distortions, and couldn't find a distortion at any of the mentioned places... however I do recognize the potential for them to be there. Maybe volume / headphones / listening device / or OS have something to do with the distortions you heard... At any rate, it might be a good idea for me to update and remove all possibility of distortion.
I edited the Bass for later on in the song, and it is perfect then, I guess I just relied on that, and didn't go and edit it for when it comes in (I agree, it's too loud when it comes in)
I didn't really sidechain a ton in this song, well, I did, but not strongly, because I didn't want this to be too.. Housey/Trancey, if that makes sense. it might be a good idea to mess around with that, and maybe bump it up a bit, so, good point.
Thank you again for the amazing review!
With best wishes,
- MrM3
i feel like the mixing could be slightly better but other than that very nice and relaxing :)
edit: probably just personal preference tbh, but mostly sounds like there isnt alot of sidechaining with the kick and i think im used to that :D
Hrm... Do you want to specify *how* the mixing could be *slightly* better?
I mastered this exactly how it is for a reason, and if you feeel like it's not good enough, or something, then could you explain how to improve?
Edit: The sidechain isn't overly heavy, but yes, that was intentional :)
Thanks for the review :3