I was gonna BLAM this!
But then the words at the end burned into the back of my skull. HA HA just faking you out, it was very moving and had a lot of big big words some stupid people might not understand. Very good message and I will now and forever RESIST
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That was awesome and random as shit but it was one of the best things ive ever seen in my life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hahahahaha make more
Hahaha, craped myself
Lol, some f*ckheads really took you serious? Man, thats funny. The movie sux, but the idea behind it is great dewd. I give you a 5 on it!!!
Just hilarious,
I don't no whether I should be in a rally or laughing myself to death. Either way, I really thought this piece was funny. I was in hysterics when the Matthew Lesko and Bob Saget pictures came up. It was very good for something the was made in fifteen minutes. The narrator's voice fit in the piece perfectly, he sounded very cool. Overall, I enjoyed it. Keep up the great work!
Interesting
I don't know how this will go over with the NG crowd, (there was no boobies or 'splosions) but I think it was refreshing and well done.
Perhaps it would be more effective if you made more obvious connections between your thoughts and current/past events that we can relate to as an audience. I do see how this may... make things less poetic, so I would understand your hesitation.
Also, remember that we are looking for entertainment... I think that tieing our emotions into this in a clearer way would help keep our fickle attention. Great job! Be proud. :)