Nice job
Don't listen to the bullshit cyberxion said. It's obvious the only reason he had troubles reading the dialogue was because he's retarded. Also, this is an excellent flash, and I think you should feel proud. The rest of his review was good though. I don't have much to say on my own, except the duckhunt bit was funny as hell!
Yea I do feel proud of my work. I mean, whatever they said, thats what THEY think of the movie, it doesnt make me wanna cahange it. I do what I think is best, and I also believed that hardly any of the words are misspelled, maybe ur right! He is a big retard! and thanx for the comments!
Not bad at all.
I wouldn't go as far as SadisticSimion and say that this thing features the best story on NG, nor would I suggest that you look into directing. You simply put together an above average flash animation that managed to keep me entertained. For that, I say good job.
However, I suggest you work on your dialogue, as not only was most of it horrible, but pretty much all of it was misspelled, making it somewhat difficult to follow the story at points.
The rest of the flash was great. The sprites were top notch, and the backgrounds and everything were great. The fight between Mac and the Urban Champion guy was a little drawn out, and "Carl" getting shot in the head was a bit pointless, but all in all, it's good stuff. Again, work on the dialoque, and you'll have a true winner here.
They were not misspelled at all, you need to get YOUR spelling check, and theres a point to the shooting because that part will lead towards the story in chapter two. As far as the dialog, you got no taste, you cant understand whats going on so obviously ur a kid!
What a suck-a-rama. How'd this make top 5?
I suppose if you are into PunchOut it's ok, but otherwise, it's long and it sucks. Save your time, go chew some nails instead.
And i suppose you aren't into Punch-Out. If you dont like Punch-Out then dont waste your time on it ok???
pretty good...
i almost cried... very encouraging too. gj dude
Excellent
That was by far one of the best storied submissions i've ever seen on Newgrounds. It sort of reminded me of the movies "Kill Bill" and "The Beach." You've definatly got potential in the directing business, just keep at it and look for bigger things.
Now for the Film.
I thought this was just great, you chose a great story for a great game, and you made it all tie together. I've never seen such personality in a sprite film like you've put into this. I took the time to watch the intro to this too, and it too tied into the movie, it was very well directed. I especially like the fight scene. It was very video game-esque. The movie kept me on the edge of my seat. I especially liked how you didn't make "Little Mac" some super fighter after prison, you made it look like he lost his talent as a fighter, it was magnificent. I found no major flaws in this, even the sprites you made looked very real. I liked the comic relief you had the the Duck-Hunt cameo, and I liked how you tied Duck-Hunt into the movie too.
All in all, this was an excellent film. By far one of my favorites on NewGrounds. Keep up the spectacular work. And I cannot wait till fall when I can see more of this.
P.S. Seriously look into directing actual movies, because I think you could do really good.