That was good.
Little bit old jokes tho' (r we there yet? no. r we there yet? no.)
Keep it up!
That was good.
Little bit old jokes tho' (r we there yet? no. r we there yet? no.)
Keep it up!
Pretty good
For a first flash, I mean. Although it was infested with typos, it was still fairly good. I hope you get around making a part 2 quite soon.