Hey Mna!!
What Program are u using
Reviews for "Super Blooper Land"
Interesting...
Well, you can definitely tell that's your first flash. Animation wasn't bad though, but you could improve a teensy-weensy bit.
9 out of 10
meh
Well, the movie wasn't so good. I know this was your first flash, so I guess I can raise my score a bit. But for future flashes, make the animation faster and smoother, cut out the choppiness. Second, make your jokes and puns clearer to understand. Just because you know what the pun is, doesn't mean anybody else can get it right off the bat. Like, with the "Pipe" scene, well, that just left me wondering what the hell had happened and why. Plus, putting in some language might raise the funny bar. So yah. Basically no choppiness, make jokes clearer (no matter how much work you have to do to clear it up, cuz if you aren't clearin' the jokes up because it's too much work, well then don't do the joke at all) and make everything understandable.
OMG!
shit! was dat ur 1st movie?! i'v 'tried' 2 make some.... but.. well... yh..... anyways, dat was a really great movie! u need 2 spend more time on it though, and by this i mean when mario gets pushed up by the springymagig, try to make it a bit faster, and smoother, so it looks like he really got pushed up, u no , force and every ting. but other den dat it waz really good! i can't w8 4 da nxt 1!!!!!!! u'v got good plots and its really... real 2 c... i mean... falling off a cliff with a cape..... dat was good.... andwayz, it was a fab film ! so keep it up! ^ - ^ XP
Ohh yeah
Great work man! 'Can't wait for the next one!