very funny
this flash was very funny and the bloopers were especialy so.
very funny
this flash was very funny and the bloopers were especialy so.
Wow dude
You did pretty well for your "first flash". The music was good and I especially like the remix that was played during the credits. The humor was a tiny bit dry but it was definately funny and creative. You may also want to add the other characters into the mix rather than mainly use Mario. I definately see you put a lot of effort into this project unlike many other artists who submit 28 KB bullsh!t with no heart put into it. I have a good feeling you'll get past judgement with a good score. Hope you continue to improve and make more. :)
thanks vargas! thats what I was shooting for. I know that it can be a little dry, but hey thats another thing i deffinatly gotta work on! Thanx!
This is... not good flash...
This flash will most likely be blammed because there is nothing really appealing about it. The animation is bad...and there were discrepincies in the backround as well as the characters. You need to work on your flash skill because at this rate your going to be known as a bad flash creator. And that is a really bad reputation to have on a site like Newgrounds.
you know not everyone hates it, but I guess I will "try" to use ur critism.
XD
That was cute. It wasn't the best in the world, but it wasn't bad. I hardly ever vote over a one, and I gave it a four. Keep up the good work. <3
Hey thanx! I appreciate it when people review stuff for me. Actually keep on a look out for my next flash. Just might be a while like another 2 or 3 months!