Reviews for Mario Fun Shorts

[ProfessorQ]

Yyyyyy--no.

There's a few unwritten rules when it comes to making a good flash movie, and this breaks a few of them.

For example, there is never a good time to use "LOL" in a Flash.

Also, grammar is your friend. Even if you're not that great in English class, double-check your work. It'll at least create the illusion that you've got a lot more smarts than most of the people who submit crap into the portal.

The humor's a bit overplayed as it's been done before, but don't get me wrong. This isn't a BAD flash.

It isn't all that great, either.

Keep working on it.

CrazyVS responds:

Meh, for my second solo flash i think its good, but thanks for the tips

[coycoy]

to short!

this was a great animation man, but you needed to make it longer! i would of given you a 10 if it was longer. for your second animation it was very good. please make a second one but make it longer! by the way, im making a flash as i type. its dbz. i dont know if you like the show but i'd like for you to come review it when im finished with it anyway. rememer my newgrounds name.....COYCOY. i know it's weird, but thats what it is. anyway, keep up the good work!

CrazyVS responds:

I will look forward to your submission and will vote fair! Good luck!

[xskellingtonx]

poor mario

I think the flash had alot of potential but in the end you failed miserably. And you had a couple of typos, you should re-read your work before you post it.

CrazyVS responds:

Ok.

[Maxilor]

Decent

Nice job. Made me chuckle a bit and it really stands out from alot of the Mario Parodies ive seen in my years.
*Thumbs up*

CrazyVS responds:

OMG
Thank you
*teleport to your house with 100 dollars*

[Eddmadness]

Heh...

The first one made me lolerskate, the rest were pretty funny though.
You seem like a pretty funny person anyway, so, take the five ^^

CrazyVS responds:

Yay Finally someone smart!
lol
Thx for the review