Decent
Nice job. Made me chuckle a bit and it really stands out from alot of the Mario Parodies ive seen in my years.
*Thumbs up*
Reviews for "Mario Fun Shorts"
CrazyVS responds:
OMG
Thank you
*teleport to your house with 100 dollars*
poor mario
I think the flash had alot of potential but in the end you failed miserably. And you had a couple of typos, you should re-read your work before you post it.
CrazyVS responds:
Ok.
not bad
i liked the ones with the flagpole, they were funny. the fire-flower was kinda expected, but i was more thinking that a coin or something was in the box. the one at the end with mario and bowser was a bit cheesy, but an alright to end it off.
overall, it was alright.
CrazyVS responds:
Thanks for the review.
Yyyyyy--no.
There's a few unwritten rules when it comes to making a good flash movie, and this breaks a few of them.
For example, there is never a good time to use "LOL" in a Flash.
Also, grammar is your friend. Even if you're not that great in English class, double-check your work. It'll at least create the illusion that you've got a lot more smarts than most of the people who submit crap into the portal.
The humor's a bit overplayed as it's been done before, but don't get me wrong. This isn't a BAD flash.
It isn't all that great, either.
Keep working on it.
CrazyVS responds:
Meh, for my second solo flash i think its good, but thanks for the tips
Lame.
This could be a good flash, if only the idea's were more original. The whole "flag pole" thing has been done before, and the ending sucked. There wasn't enough funny stuff to make this worthwhile, but I still gave it a 2 for the effort. Good sprites and music but the hand-drawn bits were lame...
Not the worst ever though.
CrazyVS responds:
at least the flag pole is original not copyed from other bloopers...