Art was decent.
Hold your face away from the microphone.
The art was decent, and the music. The story was trash. The typical newgrounds crap. Just like Robot Chicken violence is mistaken for humor. When it is in fact surprise, that creates humor, the answer is.. surprise. lol And this wasn't surprising. I could tell even by the type of face you drew this would be some angry an violent crap, and I was right. Congrats.
But even if I didn't hate the story, the art is good enough that you really should have tried better on the sound, that screaming is annoying and the quality of it is terrible. It really could have been solved just but having someone in your family click 'record' for you while you screamed from a distance. Its that simple pal.