Not bad.
Reviews for "The Cloud"
JackAstral responds:
Thanks!
Your game is really repetitive... It's the feeling of the dude, but 2 times (2days) is enough to understand it in the game...
I can't wait to arrive to the end to see the conclusion...
You have good ideas, but not enough about number of ideas. Make more different minigames while the dude dreams, wake up or else; It could be a really great game ;)
If only waking up was as easy as hitting the space bar.
I found this game quite enjoyable, albeit stressful and it hurt my eyes due to the constant grey color pallet. I do however agree with others on your overall message, the character hardly represents depression and I think the message would have been better delivered if you AVOIDED the depressing faces, and depending on how many depressed faces you collected, it would alter the ending. However, I digress, your game was alright and your intentions were good, the message could have been delivered better and your overall game design could be improved, substantially.
Original, keep doing things like this!
JackAstral responds:
Thanks - I will !