Needs work.

By the 13th second of just bass drum I was getting a little worried. I think in general the buildup is perhaps a little slow...if it's going to still be building up by :40 I think you could have used throwing a few more synths in there or just a more complex drum beat to give it a little more variety. When everything cuts back down to the drum again for another semi-long period of time I really started wishing there was anything more melodic in there just to detract from the drumbeat. The synth from 1:30-2:00 is nice, but gets very repetitive very quickly, and it's not something that's remedied by the new synth at 2:00, because the ringing still cuts through everything.

The synths in themselves are cool and the drum's nicely EQd, but structurally this is wildly repetitive, and is in a semi-desperate need of more variety. It is essentially the same thing over and over for 4 minutes. Even if it was just a chord change, or a change in the feel of the drum beat, or even just not using that 1D ringtone sound as much as you did, I think it would have been a huge improvement just because it gives it that variety and makes the track more interesting to listen to. I think there's little enough in here that you could have probably accomplished the same thing in half the time and it wouldn't have been of any major detriment. Essentially, it's a catchy track. But it definitely needs more variety for the length it currently stands at.

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Old school ringtone

Sorry, but this is far too repetitive, to take up 4 minutes. The melody keeps recycling every 2-3 seconds and the beat isn't much better. You've reminded me that there used to be tunes like this to get people's attentions on mobile phones in the '90s like this.

This is the sort of tune that makes me want to destroy said phone, since it's very one dimensional and it does the piece no justice in playing it over and over again. Throw in lots of variation and maybe a solo or tow, to stop people being bored to death by listening to the piece.

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Nice

Man, the song is very nice, I was listening while i was at Lockerz, and, it's incredible to hear while you're using the PC!!

The music is very contagious, it has the perfect lenght, because it's a bit repetitive, but the beats are awesome, I didn't see the time passing!! It's really hypnoting!!

The beats are great, the lenght too, you made a cool song, too bad it repeats too much...

Keep it up, man, I like your work, keep making songs!!!
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Roger

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A very nice beat indeed. It's something that I listened to a couple of times just because I enjoyed nodding my head to it and tapping my foot to it. So very fun to listen to, but it does get quite repetitive after awhile.

Really just the same thing over and over. Even when you did add in some different things here and there that also got repetitive because it was the same thing over and over.

Using more variety with your variety (that sounds kind of weird) and perhaps spicing it up with some cool effects or vocals could make this submission less repetitive. Overall I had fun listening to it though.

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Repetitive

The bass here is pretty good and the melody loop in the background is really catchy, but the song is too repetitive and it's too simple to really keep me interested.

I think you should try to break up the main beat every now and then to introduce some other instruments and/or melodies. This way you would keep the song from getting boring too fast.

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