Really good
That is looking seriously good. I'd get someone to put it into a more appealing flash format, however because I think that is going to be the major factor in putting people off.
The art work is great, and the idea is stylish and cool. Ignore the score you get on this one, as its going to be low because of the flash style. Get someone from the Newgrounds BBS to put this into a frame by frame slideshow or some such, and it will do much much better.
very good
if you could make it a bit bigger, so that its more easy to read, and people dont have to zoom in all the time to read, this could be the next big cartoon story on NG!
unique...and I love it!
Interesting new piece of work. You totally took it into a new direction by doing it in a comic form rather than flash and thats great, deff thinking outside the box their. I love comics the way you portray them, the only problems I encountered was that some of the text is too small so if you can make them a little bigger that would be perfect. Also the music was great but it stopped after a while which kinda downed my score for you :-/. Other than that its great unique and I'm totally looking forward to the next!
Trippy
Very cool! The music goes well with it.
This could be improved somewhat by making it a bit bigger. One way of fixing your text problem is by erasing the written text and typing in new dialogue in Flash (using hte text tool).
Just a suggestion.
very good
this is the kinda dark stuff that is missing on newgrounds not that smile shit
Thank you for your feedback. Yes, I know it's a comic, not a flash animation. I was just curious how people would respond to me having my comic as a flash slide showish kinda thing. Sorry the text is small! Though I dont feel posting it with a few improvements will make a big deal. The graphics dont look very good because I had to "Trace Bitmap" the actual JPEGS. If you do like the comic, click on my site under my Author Name. That takes you to the direct comic site. I havent updated in a while however. Again, thanks for all of your input! ^.^