well, this is still well done!!!
well, this is still well done!!!
Pretty good work on this
Same thing as the first review
It's not bad. Of course better graphics, artwork, would greatly help your flash. Nobody starts off being amazing at drawing though, they might have great natural abilities, but it takes years for them to perfect their abilities. Not bad bud, but could be better, and I bet your future flashes will dwarf this.
Text needs improving
I found it hard to make out what the news report type text scrolling from right to left was saying. You might also want to improve readability of other text as well.
i meant to click 3. i'm a little drunk right now.
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